Thank you for your elaborative and insightful review on https://www.fanfiction.net/ r 12327840. Your feedback is genuinely appreciated as it is crucial to my writing progression. I am genuinely grateful for your time and effort in providing feedback. In response to your review, here are thoughts from different aspects.

1. Writing Style

You raised a concern about my writing style, terming it 'too figurative'. I appreciate your perspective on my choice of style. However, you need to understand that a writer's style is their signature. I choose to incorporate figures of speech into my prose because it provides readers with sharp and vivid pictures that ultimately enhance their reading experience. Nevertheless, I understand your preference for 'straightforward' writing and will certainly keep your preference in mind for my future pieces.

I also understand that sometimes, my figurative language might become intricate, leading some readers to lose their bearings in the narrative. To address this, I'll work on making my style accessible to an even larger reader base, employing a balance between figurativity and straightforwardness.

2. Character development

You pointed out that my characters need more depth, and that you found them to be a bit flat. I appreciate this critique. In creating characters, I strive to make them relatable and ordinary. The aim is to create characters with whom the reader can identify, rather than larger-than-life, unbelievable characters. That being said, your review highlights the fact that even everyday characters can show a deeper complexity.

However, character development is a process. A character like a person, evolves with time, circumstances, and interactions. Hence, I request you to stay hooked with my stories and witness the slow but sure transformation and development of the characters.

3. Plot progression

Your statement that my story development is slow and demands anticipation is noted. Storytelling is a delicate art that requires patience, both on the part of the author and the reader. While I understand that my narrative pace might not align with your preferences, please understand that every story has its rhythm, which is largely influenced by the theme, plot, and characters involved. That said, I'll consider increasing the pace in my future works.

4. Interaction with Fanfiction.net

You mentioned that you experienced some issues while interacting with my stories on Fanfiction.net. FanFiction.net is the world's largest and most popular fanfiction archive where fans can write and post their fanfics. Please, try clearing your cache or changing browsers to see if the issue persists. If it does, I suggest contacting their support services for additional assistance.

Common Questions

Q: Why do you use figurative language?
A: Figurative language aids in developing vivid images in the reader's mind, ultimately enhancing the reading experience.

Q: Will you change your writing style following this review?
A: While I appreciate the feedback, my writing style is part of my signature. However, I will strive for a balance between figurativity and straightforwardness to cater to a wider audience.

Q: Will there be changes in your character development approach?
A: Yes, feedback like yours helps me understand the readers' perspectives. I will strive to add more depth to my characters.

Q: Why is your story progression slow?
A: Every story has its rhythm which is dictated by various factors. But I will consider spurting the pace without compromising the storytelling.

References

1. Fanfiction.net. (n.d.). FanFiction. https://www.fanfiction.net/.

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